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--- person:evrith [2023/09/28 22:00] – shyriath
+++ person:evrith [2024/01/25 10:10] (current) – shyriath
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   * **Titles:** N/A
   * **Date of birth:** 71 [[history:cloud_era:|Cloud]] 30:8
-  * **Place of birth:** Khilaad, on the coast of the [[avishraa:place:Denoric Gulf]] of the [[avishraa:place:Windward Sea]]
+  * **Place of birth:** [[geopolitical:Khilaad]], on the coast of the [[geography:sekhaa:marine:Denoric Gulf]] of the [[geography:sekhaa:marine:Windward Sea]]
   * **Date of death:** To be determined
   * **Place of death:** To be determined
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   * **Species:** [[Takma:]] ([[Chosen:]])
   * **Race:** [[takma:start#variations|Littoral]]
-  * **Ethnic origin:** [[culture:ethnicity:Denoric]]
+  * **Ethnic origin:** [[ethnicity:Denoric]]
   * **Current ethnic identification:** None
   * **Native language:** [[language:imperial:#vernacular_imperial|Denoric Imperial]]
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 ==== Religious views ====
-Evrith believes in the reality of the [[culture:mythology:imperial_religion:Siathar:]] and [[culture:mythology:imperial_religion:Lamnar:]] of the [[culture:mythology:Imperial religion:]]. That said, she is not affiliated with the [[culture:mythology:Imperial religion:]] in any //formal// sense, and does not engage in the practices of worship generally expected of an adherent. Though this is partly due to a Kaean dislike of formality in religious matters, it may be most ascribed to Evrith's conviction that she has offended the gods - through her attempt at kinslaying, if not for any of her other self-perceived faults - and that they are not only not interested in her entreaties, but have cursed her for her transgressions.
+Evrith believes in the reality of the [[mythology:imperial_religion:siathar:]] and [[mythology:imperial_religion:lamnar:]] of the [[mythology:imperial_religion:]]. That said, she is not affiliated with the [[mythology:imperial_religion:]] in any //formal// sense, and does not engage in the practices of worship generally expected of an adherent. Though this is partly due to a Kaean dislike of formality in religious matters, it may be most ascribed to Evrith's conviction that she has offended the gods - through her attempt at kinslaying, if not for any of her other self-perceived faults - and that they are not only not interested in her entreaties, but have cursed her for her transgressions.
-Her recent encounters with [[concept:doomtouched|the]] [[culture:mythology:imperial_religion:seekers_of_the_depths|followers]] of [[culture:mythology:imperial_religion:lamnar:Uvuun]] have only strengthened this latter conviction, since it now appears that, not content with the foregone conclusion of Evrith being delivered to Him after a miserable death, He is now actively seeking her out to hasten her end.
+Her recent encounters with [[concept:doomtouched|the]] [[mythology:imperial_religion:seekers_of_the_depths|followers]] of [[mythology:imperial_religion:lamnar:uvuun]] have only strengthened this latter conviction, since it now appears that, not content with the foregone conclusion of Evrith being delivered to Him after a miserable death, He is now actively seeking her out to hasten her end.
 ==== Social aptitude ====
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 ==== Wealth and possessions ====
-Evrith has very little to her name; most of what she carries now consists of supplies provided by [[person:Shyriath]], [[person:Tikke]], or [[person:Unitti]] and she does not really consider them hers. The only objects she approaches having feelings of ownership toward are several [[concept:glyphic_teleportation#linking books]] obtained in [[avishraa:community:Oraa]], and since she stole them from their original owner, the moral rightness of her claim to them is debatable.
+Evrith has very little to her name; most of what she carries now consists of supplies provided by [[person:Shyriath]], [[person:Tikke]], or [[person:Unitti]] and she does not really consider them hers. The only objects she approaches having feelings of ownership toward are several [[concept:glyphic_teleportation#linking books]] obtained in [[geopolitical:Oraa]], and since she stole them from their original owner, the moral rightness of her claim to them is debatable.
 ===== Personal history =====
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 ===== Relationships =====
 ==== Family ====
-Evrith's parents and remaining grandparents were killed by a mob in her village. While she has three or four older siblings who left home before this point, she was too young to have much of a relationship with the ones who were present when she was born, and they are effectively strangers to her.
+Evrith's parents - including her mother Kazeth - and remaining grandparents were killed by a mob in her village. While she has three or four older siblings who left home before this point, she was too young to have much of a relationship with the ones who were present when she was born, and they are effectively strangers to her.
 Her relationship with her older brother Uruth was much closer, but fraught at best. He raised her, but being relatively young himself, he was not prepared for the difficulties of foster-parenting a young witch while remaining on the move; he came to resent and blame her for the way his life turned out, and the interactions that resulted played a large role in Evrith's psychological problems. After a particularly unpleasant incident in which Evrith, pushed to the breaking point, attempted to place Uruth in a fatal situation, Uruth left her. Evrith finds it particularly hard to forgive herself for this, and believes that the gods are punishing her for it.
 ==== Other individuals ====
-Besides her brother, Evrith has largely remained out of extended social contact until relatively recently. The main exception was a period, in late 74 Cloud, during which she encountered and lived near an isolated [[xtauh:]] woman of the [[culture:ethnicity:Hnemekk]] ethnicity, from whom she learned [[language:Hnem Dwa]] and with whom she developed a wary but civil and mutually beneficial relationship. Evrith moved on after the woman died of illness.
+Besides her brother, Evrith has largely remained out of extended social contact until relatively recently. The main exception was a period, in late 74 Cloud, during which she encountered and lived near an isolated [[xtauh:]] woman of the [[ethnicity:Hnem Osh]] ethnicity, from whom she learned [[language:Hnem Dwa]] and with whom she developed a wary but civil and mutually beneficial relationship. Evrith moved on after the woman died of illness.
 More recently, she has acquired a group of (for lack of a better term) followers in her quest to neutralize the future threat of the [[person:dlyss|figure in white]]:
-  * [[person:An-uxhwi]]: a youngish [[xtauh:]] male who, while both were enslaved in a silver mine near [[avishraa:community:Torniim]], nursed Evrith back to health and became her assistant in engineering the mass escape that freed them. An-uxhwi appears to have developed a devotion to Evrith that, while having some basis in gratitude and religious feeling, has an increasing personal element. Evrith is very touched by this and both enjoys his company and has come to rely on his support, but worries about what fate she will lead him to, particularly since she sees many futures in which their mutual liking turns into something deeper still.
+  * [[person:An-uxhwi]]: a youngish [[xtauh:]] male who, while both were enslaved in a silver mine near [[geopolitical:Torniim]], nursed Evrith back to health and became her assistant in engineering the mass escape that freed them. An-uxhwi appears to have developed a devotion to Evrith that, while having some basis in gratitude and religious feeling, has an increasing personal element. Evrith is very touched by this and both enjoys his company and has come to rely on his support, but worries about what fate she will lead him to, particularly since she sees many futures in which their mutual liking turns into something deeper still.
   * [[person:Shyriath]]: a male [[Chosen:]] [[takma:]], met while Evrith and An-uxhwi fled from Torniim south through the desert, not very old but cynical and suspicious beyond his years. Their initial meeting and Shyriath's misinterpretation of its circumstances led to a display of his [[chosen:magic:mind|mentalist]] and [[chosen:magic:element|elementalist]] powers that left Evrith deeply resentful; between this incident, a certain incompatibility of personalities, and the frictions generated between a [[chosen:start#kaeans|Kaean]] and a [[chosen:start#srians|Srian]] who are both unused to managing their differences, the relationship between the two is rocky at best. Evrith recognizes Shyriath as an ally and as essentially a decent person, but they do not consistently get along with each other and make no great pretense of doing so.
-  * [[person:Tikke]] and [[person:Unitti]]: a pair of male xtauh around Evrith's own age, encountered during the events at [[avishraa:community:Oraa]] and swept up along with the others. Their relative lack of command of [[language:Imperial:]] has slowed the process of getting to know them and she does not feel that she has much in common with them, but she finds them pleasant to be around, though Tikke's extravagant personality sometimes grows grating.
+  * [[person:Tikke]] and [[person:Unitti]]: a pair of male xtauh around Evrith's own age, encountered during the events at [[geopolitical:Oraa]] and swept up along with the others. Their relative lack of command of [[language:Imperial:]] has slowed the process of getting to know them and she does not feel that she has much in common with them, but she finds them pleasant to be around, though Tikke's extravagant personality sometimes grows grating.
   * [[person:Hyd'natt]]: